Post by Upinsmoke47 on Nov 29, 2012 19:59:33 GMT
Just a poem I put together. I don't know why, I'm not usually a poem guy... Be prepared for that fabled thing called 'a poem without rhyme' or 'free verse' or something like that.
This is actually the very first poem I did outside of an assignment from school, and I'm quite proud of it! Please tell me what you think!
"Work"
A falling sun painted the sky in burning colors
Birds make black shadows over the crisp green grass
Apples fall from trees, kicked by a farmer as orange as the sunset.
Still so much work to do.
Laughter lights up the twilight sky
Light shows off many living colors
The light is shown as a strained smile, it's owner as pink as the frosting.
Still so much work to do.
Gems reflect the noon sun
Beautiful swirls and shiny fabric lie on a mannequin
The unicorn frets over her large job.
Still so much work to do.
Cyan wings unfurl against the early risen sun
A rainbow trail darts across the sky
Rainbow mare notices a wall-eyed pony fly towards town hall.
Still so much work to do.
Critters rush towards a slumbering Pegasus
Shy assertiveness feeds the furry creatures
She finds an angelic devil deciding to starve rather than eat lettuce.
Still so much work to do.
Moonlight penetrates through a wooden window
A scroll tolled up to be burnt tomorrow
Lavender scientist tucks in her sleeping scaly friend.
No more work to do.
This is actually the very first poem I did outside of an assignment from school, and I'm quite proud of it! Please tell me what you think!
"Work"
A falling sun painted the sky in burning colors
Birds make black shadows over the crisp green grass
Apples fall from trees, kicked by a farmer as orange as the sunset.
Still so much work to do.
Laughter lights up the twilight sky
Light shows off many living colors
The light is shown as a strained smile, it's owner as pink as the frosting.
Still so much work to do.
Gems reflect the noon sun
Beautiful swirls and shiny fabric lie on a mannequin
The unicorn frets over her large job.
Still so much work to do.
Cyan wings unfurl against the early risen sun
A rainbow trail darts across the sky
Rainbow mare notices a wall-eyed pony fly towards town hall.
Still so much work to do.
Critters rush towards a slumbering Pegasus
Shy assertiveness feeds the furry creatures
She finds an angelic devil deciding to starve rather than eat lettuce.
Still so much work to do.
Moonlight penetrates through a wooden window
A scroll tolled up to be burnt tomorrow
Lavender scientist tucks in her sleeping scaly friend.
No more work to do.
